After numerous studies, this is the composition I arrived at for the final piece. The finished painting will be approx. 40 x 42". Critiques are welcome.
I like it,Te only objection is that the door takes almost a quarter of the painting, in my opinion doesnt help the painting but takes away in the overall composition, this is only my opinion, I wish you well.Cheers
This looks great! I can just imagine it having a blue tone to it from the tv. The only thing I have to say is that if his room is so messy, I would expect the bed to not be made up.
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beautiful work here daniel, Im a fan.
I like it,Te only objection is that the door takes almost a quarter of the painting, in my opinion doesnt help the painting but takes away in the overall composition, this is only my opinion, I wish you well.Cheers
This looks great! I can just imagine it having a blue tone to it from the tv. The only thing I have to say is that if his room is so messy, I would expect the bed to not be made up.
I really like how you used the light coming off the t.v. as a framing device for the figure.
like this
I love it. I am not good at describing why.
Your trace is very good !
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